Wednesday, September 5, 2018

The magical world

By Toby

Long ago, in an unbelievable world, there lived two siblings

named Hansel and Gretel. They had the meanest parents ever, and the family didn't have enough food for all of them, so the parents took their children to a wizard to be killed.

They walked them through the gleaming forest to an old mean wizard who placed them in a cage. But one day when he opened the cage to feed them, they got out and cut his hand off and ran into the forest. But they wanted more revenge on that wizard because he had killed their uncle.

After they escaped they were were cold and hungry and found some bright red berries they saw on some bushes in the forest. But they were not any berries, these berries gave them superpowers. The superpowers were strength, speed, lightning, invisibility and to be able make fire with their hands.

Hansel said ”let's are going to get revenge on that wizard and our parents “whaw whaw” So they took their energetic bodies to action. Well they started at the parents they struck their house with lightning and the parents and they causing the parents to run in the bushes like scared little ants. And they chased them as a cheetah chases its prey.They arrived at the wizards and they got in the boat and they went across the ocean as the lightning speared into the ocean.The waves were as big as a mountain.As hansel said to Gretel “praise for impact as the biggest wave emerged and struck like thunder hitting stormy clouds.”

And they washed up right in front of the wizards house.And immediately grabbed him they put him in a be-header and they pulled him up with their amazing might and they let it go like the waves le their mighty power go and.It was lights for the wizard. So the whole family was never ever seen again.

2 comments:

  1. Hi toby, i love the story. but i can't really read it because it goes of the padge!

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  2. Cool story, really creative. Where did you get the idea?

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